Forum:Detroit Vol.2? The Seven Syndicate

GreatDetroitTribe 15:35, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

This is an outline on my next story.

-The Seven Syndicate is a Pre-war style Group of Purple Gang OR Al Capone era Style Mobsters/Bootleggers

-They are Based at What used to be 7mile and Dequindre and number at about 140 troops and affiliates

-They are based around the 7. It represents Much of the laws and concepts the Organization follows including the 7 Principles of Life the 7 laws or power, the 7 Worded Oath's, the 7 members of the council, the 7 branches of the body, the 7 deadly sins, the 7 unforgivable acts,, the 7 members of the Goon squads they travel in.

-their main revenue comes from Drugs such as psycho, Jet, and Diesel, and homemade alcohol like Hooch,Gank, and swag.

-their main points of interest in terms of profit are The City of New Redford-Under the Michigan Commonwealth, Maroon city - under the Greater Detroit Nation, settlements 6 and 7 of the M tribe and Steelbluff of the M-tribe.

So is this a good idea? or should i go bak to the drawing board? i have more i just don't wanna waste my time on something that Sux LMAO! LMAO!

7 laws of power
Loyalty and Unity - The best organization is not necessarily the largest, but the most unified. It's better to have 3 troops who trust and sacrifice for each other then 30 who don't care about who lives and who dies. Trust in your fellow man, He is your only protection.

Strategy -

Sorry.. but your explanation really doesn't make clear what whatever the hell you're talking about is. Could you please try to make it more clear as to what you are trying to do? Broeman 12:26, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

Looks interesting, but can the Jet. Make some unique drug, with unique properties, made only by select gangs in the Detroit area. That'll give them an edge and a reason to be in the city. Outside the obvious massive amounts of scrap for salvage and tech. http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/fallout/images/thumb/5/5c/Scribe.jpg/15px-Scribe.jpg Tagaziel (call!) 12:42, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

to broeman, My purpose is Simply to write. lol Um i wrote another short story yesterday(well posted it at least) and i took a comment that someone else made and tried to upgrade my story...this was just an addition of a Gang that i thought of. My reason for this post was to see if my idea was good or not.....notice i said i have more.

-toGrizzyly Lose the Jet(and psycho?) and Keep the diesel...that will work.GreatDetroitTribe 13:50, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

You do know that this forum has spellcheck, right? It amazes me that people want to write, and have people read what they write, but won't take the time to take care of spelling errors. Being from the Detroit area (northern suburbs) I'd find this somewhat interesting, but honestly when I'm reading, every spelling error is like a speed bump in the road. LVTDUDE 16:55, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

You could have this gang based out of the Channel 7 studios, and they could worship old Channel 7 newscasters, like Bill Bonds, as deities. Outcasts from this group could have moved on to old, abandoned 7-11 stores. They could make drugs like Slurpees and Big Gulps.... LVTDUDE 16:59, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

LMAO the 2nd part was funny and no i didnt realize this site had spell chekk....how many words did i mispell? if you could point them out that could work GreatDetroitTribe 19:05, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

There, I fixed your spelling errors in this one. lol. I can do it in the main story you wrote the other day if you like. I also whole-heartedly agree that it's annoying when there are so many spelling errors. People should take the time to re-read what they wrote before posting.(yes whole-heartedly is a word this thing just doesn't know it) Spawnsos 13:03, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Thanx.....lol i didnt even know i had that many but if you want you can fix the other one.GreatDetroitTribe 15:35, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

ok. I edited it, so go check it out and tell me what you think. Spawnsos 01:40, 21 July 2009 (UTC)