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Tagaziel (talk) 10:24, 25 October 2016 (UTC)

Brotherhood of Steel
Thank you for your contributions! I've edited two points:


 * 1) I removed mention of the experimentation being offensive to their honor. Extrajudicial killing of the science staff by a rogue military unit is hardly honorable or in line with U.S. Army ethics (ignoring the fact that the Army was a pretty corrupt organization in the setting, what with the occupation of Canada, murdering restrained resistance members on national television, fighting own countrymen during food riots).
 * 2) I also removed the claim that the corruption was limited to the Mojave Brotherhood. There's no source that would make this the case. The Mojave chapter was emblematic of the problems of the Western Brotherhood in general and that includes Lost Hills. The War affected the whole of New California, not just the frontier, and the Republic is not happily coexisting with a major research and development house, but fighting a rogue monastic organization bent on propping up its waning power. See Brotherhood War for reference. Furthermore, Lost Hills can remain unoccupied by the Republic, enough to transfer all authority to Maxson, and the Brotherhood be considered neutralized. Long as it's contained to the Central Valley, it isn't a problem. Tagaziel (talk) 10:24, 25 October 2016 (UTC)